Here is one feedback i received from one of my older audience members....
From this feedback i found i received more constructive criticism than from my others i received.. for example
Q6) The journalism side of the article does that seem professional.... if not what doesnt work?
''was ok but could of been a bit more expressive''
Although i did receive positive feedback too. I also found that my older audience feedback had looked more deeply into the magazine and actually found what i was trying to portray through the use of my mise en scene and colour scheme i used.
This is one of the feedbacks i received from a younger friend....
Q1) What does the title suggest to you?
''exciting and enjoyable''
From this feedback i got positive comments about the professionalism of my magazine and how eye catching it is at first glance.
Overall, i did receive good feedback and some interesting comments along with constructive criticism too. Im glad the things i wanted to portray have stood out to my audience (hence the feedback i was given.) Im pleased with my final product and the comments i was given.